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Puisi: When My Soul Is Empty

14 June 2010 127 views 8 Comments

When My Soul Is Empty
by: Yaaku

I’ll let the wind blow me up
I’ll let the wave bring me to the cruel ocean
I’d like your claws to tear me into pieces
I’d love the fire to burn me down
When the devils whisper in me
I don’t care the angels cry
Never mind that fairy mercy and I’ll take no attention to the cupid’s smile
It’s just when my soul is empty

Tentang Yaaku: 30 years old, in a lonely place, Central Java.

8 Comments »

  • bryandra said:

    @yaaku:ehhmm,,pak de puitis jg trnyata!Gak nyangka aq..wkwkkwkw
    Like this daH! :D

  • mbuzzz said:

    i like it
    i can feel what yaaku said…..

  • Jo said:

    Wah, ciamik dirimu ya sob!
    Teruskanlah.. Teruskanlah..
    Sip!

  • Yaaku said:

    Waah…!Thanks my SK,puisi yg biasa sj,dn g d apa2nya dibandingkan dg poem2 yg laen.
    Seneng bgt rasanya!:-)

  • patrickstar said:

    Nice poem.. Apa aku bs mengenalmu? ;p

  • Yaaku said:

    @teman2:thanks ya,,!
    Rasanya diriku mengenal dirimu Patrick…:-P

  • patrickstar said:

    Then, glad to know..
    How do you do? ;p

  • Quinsa said:

    So deep…

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